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So I bought Virginia Tufte’s Artful Sentences: Syntax as Style
and I’m not far in enough for a review, but I wanted to share some of my favorite sentences from the book: “War remains the decisive human failure.” -John Kenneth Galbraith (talk about decisive!) “His was a book which never … Continue reading
That Girl Is On Fire, Mentally, 2
INT. JORGE’S APARTMENT – NIGHT Jorge is sitting on the couch, burning weed with his friend KLAUS, who’s 24, German heritage, a little pudgy. KLAUS So it’s over with Virginie? JORGE It’s been a month. Where the fuck have you … Continue reading
Luis & Litwack present: scenes from That Girl Is On Fire, Mentally – The Movie
INT. PATIO RESTURANT – NIGHT Jorge and Virginie sit outside, under one of those outdoor heat lamps. VIRGINIE I mean, I love him. And I love you. I don’t see why that should be a problem, or why you’re being … Continue reading
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This microfiction displays all of my worst tendencies
but I’m going to post it anyway, before I get scared. Too many links recently. I wrote it this morning, like, fast, and it’s 40% fact. —— The fourth night after I moved back into the house of my parents, … Continue reading
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2005 Annual
2005 Annual is out!! Download it here [1.3mb pdf]. CRAZY INTENSE introduction by Luis Ripoll – ladies, he’s single!
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Dateline 2006: alternatives for well-worn words and phrases
intense – “stellar” creepy – “black” basically – it’s redundant, sadly dude – “braa” homeslice – “facemonster.” “Hey, facemonster.” cockfarmer – “adorable” (cf. “he’s a cockfarmer” / “he’s adorable”)
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Working on a book list
First of all, I’m back! Luis was in town for the past week and it was such a whirlwind of activity I barely had time to DO DRUGS let alone maintain my weblog. John was here too, and I want … Continue reading
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Dialogue
Cliche: “His loud, braying laugh.” Perhaps slightly better: “His ugly cachinnation.” Psychotic: “His pistachio.”
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The best line David Mamet has ever written
“How did you know that was north?” “Well, that’s – that’s Cassiopeia. That’s my girlfriend.”
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Jonathan Franzen at the Hammer
It was good; he read from his new New Yorker story about breakups and an additional section that wasn’t published. He’s a fine, funny speaker. The moderator asked the question I was going to, so I didn’t – F. said … Continue reading
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Finishing up David Foster Wallace’s Oblivion now
…and boy, am I having an emotional reaction to his language. He is, as you know, one of the few and talented true artists of word-choice, which sometimes eclipses or obscures your (my) broader attention to the work at hand. … Continue reading
David Foster Wallace at the Hammer
I have a tremendous appreciation and fondness for DFW. I’d seen him read once before, and tonight, for unlike last time, he seemed, for wont of a better word, colicky; fighting the audiance on questions and answers and just generally … Continue reading
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